wherepainisart

You told a story of a tree that we see everyday but you described it lik a movie the rhymes and the comparisons made this poem unique and natural overall ...

This is a deep poem it doesn't just tell a story it explains it and the feeling of the silence this was a excellent poem keep it up

Hey there welcome to yws and first of all this is a great poem you didnt do too much you gave a average poem but it gave a excellent feeling ...