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Re: Drowning
thankyou for all your advice. its helped ALOT!!! this was writen out of a creative spark, so thats why you dont know much abouts whats happening. i hope i will ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: untitled ( the raid maybe) -part one
thanks for the comments everyone, everyone but staplestoo. sereously dude, get a life. i could change the plot of the story so if i had a title, i would have ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: truth seaker
thank you guys for you comments and help, i did write this quite quickly, it was a imagination burst and i am also not a very strong speller (Sorry) well ...
Nov 18, 2008
