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Re: No one will do but you
Hi, I love how short this piece is, allows the reader to think more personally, little to no background information leaves a lot up to the audience. The only real ...
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: Kicking Like There's No Tomorrow
This is absolutely fantastic, completely well described, wonderful story. Sweet, caring, beautiful Lea. We'd been friends for the longest time and I could depend her for anything. She was the ...
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: Take Flight
I'm going to start by saying that this was absolutely beautiful. I just have a few things to say though You're just a bird trapped in a cage, you're just ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Letting Go
This is really brilliant. You have an excellent flow of dialogue and a really nice, well thought out plot. I like the lack of background information, it leave a lot ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Just a building...
There is a building, tucked back, down the street. Inside, not a soul stirs. The building has a lobby, with clean white floors, and decorative plants. The welcome mat greets ...
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: Together
You're really very talented, and leaving things up for the readers to sort of guess about is clever. You should really watch your verb tenses though, but otherwise this is ...
Oct 6, 2010
