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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: but worst of all you gave me your name

    I felt this one, it physically hit me in the chest—the bitterness, anger, pain, resignation you express here are all so visceral. The repetition of "I'm not her I'm not ...

    Feb 16, 2022

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: When I Sit In Class

    I can definitely relate to your poem here, and you do a wonderful job capturing the essence of a mind that just won't stay put here with this section. At ...

    Feb 16, 2022

  • Short Story » Realistic, General
    Re: My Happy Place

    A few things here: first, you paint a detailed picture of this 'happy place' — I can see it perfectly in my mind. Second, the words and the way in ...

    Dec 2, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Victory, mine

    I think you do an admirable job capturing the conflicting emotions of these dark moments. It's a hard line to walk in exploring subject matter surrounding difficult topics like sh ...

    Dec 2, 2021

It is most unlikely. But - here comes the big "but" - not impossible.
— Roald Dahl