Young Writers Society

I felt this one, it physically hit me in the chest—the bitterness, anger, pain, resignation you express here are all so visceral. The repetition of "I'm not her I'm not ...

I can definitely relate to your poem here, and you do a wonderful job capturing the essence of a mind that just won't stay put here with this section. At ...

A few things here: first, you paint a detailed picture of this 'happy place' — I can see it perfectly in my mind. Second, the words and the way in ...

I think you do an admirable job capturing the conflicting emotions of these dark moments. It's a hard line to walk in exploring subject matter surrounding difficult topics like sh ...