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Re: Eleven Days In Hell #3
Okay. So, I liked it, generally, at first. After a while it was a little too reminiscent of that movie The Ring- "you will die in seven days"- but I'll ...
May 9, 2008 -
Re: Finding Atlantis (Ch 1) --Rewrite!
married at 13?!? ouch! =] well, i really liked it. there were a couple of places, like here: Maybe if you actually tried to write your essay, you will do ...
Oct 24, 2007 -
Re: she calls me beautiful
I think it's really powerful to deliver an emotional piece like this in such a sarcastic and almost emotionless way. i did have to reread in a couple of places ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: Shotgun
It thought it was good- well-written and insightful. But no one ever walks. I liked that you took a kind of cliche term and made it your own. The only ...
Sep 9, 2007 -
Re: Archer's Legend- Chapter two: From Truth, Logic
I'm going to assume you know that Erebus is a word from Greek mythology meaning death, and say congratulations on a great allusion =] You gotta love seeing authors use ...
Aug 25, 2007 -
Re: Trapped
Wow. That was pretty intense. "If" was a fine word when talking about a sports team making it to the playoffs, or when talking about someone dividing up the winnings ...
Aug 25, 2007
