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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Eleven Days In Hell #3

    Okay. So, I liked it, generally, at first. After a while it was a little too reminiscent of that movie The Ring- "you will die in seven days"- but I'll ...

    May 9, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Finding Atlantis (Ch 1) --Rewrite!

    married at 13?!? ouch! =] well, i really liked it. there were a couple of places, like here: Maybe if you actually tried to write your essay, you will do ...

    Oct 24, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: she calls me beautiful

    I think it's really powerful to deliver an emotional piece like this in such a sarcastic and almost emotionless way. i did have to reread in a couple of places ...

    Sep 9, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Shotgun

    It thought it was good- well-written and insightful. But no one ever walks. I liked that you took a kind of cliche term and made it your own. The only ...

    Sep 9, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Archer's Legend- Chapter two: From Truth, Logic

    I'm going to assume you know that Erebus is a word from Greek mythology meaning death, and say congratulations on a great allusion =] You gotta love seeing authors use ...

    Aug 25, 2007
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Trapped

    Wow. That was pretty intense. "If" was a fine word when talking about a sports team making it to the playoffs, or when talking about someone dividing up the winnings ...

    Aug 25, 2007


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