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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Orchid

    I thought this poem was adorable! I really liked it, i think it had just enough power and sugary sweetness. As far as suggestions I think happy-go-lucky touched on everything ...

    Aug 9, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: (Mis)communiqué

    Hi, I really, really like your poem. This is totally not a critique and its really lame of me but I don't have much time. Okay, right now I can't ...

    Jul 21, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: 17

    I can totally relate to this poem, Haha. These kind of teenager angst/growing up poems are kind of over done and to be honest when I first saw the title ...

    Jul 14, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You are Fantasy, I am Island

    Hi? I like this, a bunch. The first time I read it, to be honest, I just didn't expect what I was getting. It kind of surprised me. So anyway ...

    Jul 12, 2009


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