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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: For Daddy

    I have three dad's so this really struck me because for one- My father was in the room when I was born. For two it's difficult as a child to ...

    Dec 30, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Distance

    I think I know what's going on. You like a girl but someone else likes her and she broke both of your hearts and you're trying to get over her. ...

    Dec 30, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Crush on the Clerk

    I liked this one. I guess because I know what you feel. I have a crush on 2 grocery store clerks and one Starbucks clerk. They're gorgous. But I felt ...

    Dec 30, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Poem--"Untitled" (In grudging memory of D)

    I really liked this poem! It's so relateable and powerful. The only thing I can think that would have fixed it was if you posted it before she/he left. but ...

    Dec 10, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You

    It was good. But you need to dig deeper into your emotions, it definitley needs more emotion. However, it is not a lost cause. Its very short, sweet, and simple. ...

    Nov 22, 2005


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