warionack25

I like the idea of this poem a lot, and will say it's really good personally, but alas I must put on my Criticism Cap and take a closer look. ...

Thanks for the feedback Moonlight, I'll be sure to make the right changes, thanks for pointing them out!

Sorry about the lack of stanza separation, this site is being a dingus and not letting me put them in.

Oh nooooooo I copy-and-pasted this from google drive and the stanza's didn't translate! Thank's for the honest critique, stanza's are indeed super important.

Thanks a bunch Anna, and thanks for following me! I look forward to reading each other's work in the future! ^_^