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Re: Neglected by Nature
Thank you for being so generous with your time! Not only did you read it once to help me out- but you read it again after edits! If you're serious ...
Sep 22, 2018 -
Re: Neglected by Nature
Thank you very much for taking the time to review this! You make some really good points about how humans would still evolve as all species do in the wild, ...
Sep 22, 2018 -
Re: Neglected by Nature
Thank you so much for your review! Under your sugesstions, i decided to change it from "what if wolves were the 'humans' of the earth" to "how would we fare ...
Sep 19, 2018 -
Re: Neglected by Nature
I decided to edit it to be what if humans WEREN'T the top evolutionary race. Just a heads up!
Sep 19, 2018 -
Re: Neglected by Nature
My prompt was 'if dogs were the "humans" of the Earth'. I do agree that my opinion was very one-sided, so thank you for pointing that out. You did make ...
Sep 18, 2018 -
Re: Detonator
#relatable oof im a cringy teen
Sep 12, 2018 -
Re: Detonator
Thank you so much! When I wrote it I was feeling very frustrated and I just wanted to scream into a pillow. I'm really glad other people feel the same ...
Sep 12, 2018 -
Re: All is well!
Wow! Is this E D G A R A L L E N P O E?? There is literally only one little tiny nit picky thing that I would change ...
Sep 12, 2018 -
Re: Detonator
Thank you soooooooooo much!
Sep 12, 2018 -
Re: Detonator
Thank you for reviewing my poem! Every review helps! :) I wrote this poem to kind of vent so I didn%u2019t pay much attention to metaphors and structure. Thanks for ...
Sep 12, 2018 -
Re: Detonator
Thank you very much for reviewing my work and saying such nice things about it! I wrote this quickly and out of frustration, so I really appreciate you pointing out ...
Sep 12, 2018 -
Re: Circus
Thank you very much for the warm welcome and support! This one was just kind of a brain vomit, but I thought it was important enough to post. I'm really ...
Sep 11, 2018 -
Re: Last School Picture
This is the kind of thing that makes me really mad that I suck at poetry.... Really good descriptive storytelling!
Sep 10, 2018 -
Re: puppers are the children of dog
This is great. No words. Utterly speechless. 14/10 made my day.
Sep 9, 2018
