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Very interesting poem. It is certainly thought provoking. It is even kind of funny when you think about it. It is true how sometimes rhymes can fly and flow, or ...

Overall, it is a good poem, but it needs just a little work. For example in this line I made find it filled with joy, I may find it filled ...

Hey,I think that you capture the feeling of having to wear armor to protect yourself from everyone else. Others on here have said that this poem lacks emotion, and it ...