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The only problem is that they seem almost too mean to Jeff. I don't think it would be as harsh and slightly more enjoyable if they were a little nicer, ...

I agree with StarryWold, the quotes really help give the story dimension. I'm not in any position to say whether or not it is historically accurate, but it seems about ...

Good, there are a few typos; "don'g go changing" should be "don't go changing", and "fame got to your head" should be "fame go to your head". Keep on writing! ...