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  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The First Rainfall..

    Hey! Victoria here with a short review! Since someone already covered the grammar mistakes etc, I'll comment on your writing style etc. I really like how this "story" is written, ...

    May 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Falls and Scars

    Hey, this is Viclemore with a short review! I love the feelings in this poem, it's actual the best one I've read this week. I felt the emotions behind your ...

    May 16, 2016
  • Short Story » Health, General Re: He tells me stories

    Hey, this is Viclemore with a short review! You've been able to express eating disorders in a powerful way. As someone who have never suffered from the disease, I can ...

    May 16, 2016
  • Short Story » Other, Dramatic Re: Another Smoke

    Hey, this is Viclemore with a short review! This is my first real meeting with "flash fiction", and I can say I quite enjoyed it! You don't bore us with ...

    May 16, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: A Sea of Kisses and Faint "I Love Yous"

    "A little piece to satisfy your inner romance craving" and it surely did. I'm not a big fan of romance, but I love good descriptions that are able to make ...

    May 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: An Ocean Of Dreams

    I'm Viclemore, here with a "review". I love the depth in this work, and how you can create such a masterpiece with easy "standard" rhymes. I love your language and ...

    May 16, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: They Have to be Wrong

    Hey, Victoria from Norway here with a review! (sorry for possibly bad English) I'm impressed, really. I've read alot of similar text earlier, but all from the girl/guy's perspective. But ...

    May 30, 2015


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