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Hey MysticalBlood! Being a Star Wars fan, this piece really interested me; it's a really interesting idea! I won't critique spelling errors and whatnot, just the story: What I liked: ...

Cool, thanks PenNpaper!

Thanks, Chirantha. I'll try to alter it a little to describe him better (By the way, I hadn't finished the whole chapter, which is why it ended so abrubtly. I'll ...

Thank for the reviews everyone!

Hey! This is really pretty. This is the second song of yours that I've reviewed, and you've really got a knack for it! Do you play an instrument or anything? ...

Hey telle! This is really pretty! I loved the lyrics, and the rythym the words had was great! Nice to meet a fellow believer! Vet

Whoa! This poem is so cool! I can tell you did a lot of research and spent a lot of time on this. Thumbs up!

Hey! I liked this version of the prologue a lot more than the first version. You really gave the guards a lot more character and background. PM me when you ...

Hey! I thought this was really good! I could really relate to it. Great job. Jesus Loves You!

The poem is too plastic it's like i heard it all before but the style that it is written in isn't used much lately, so that you can bring it ...

Hey, this is an awesome poem. I am a believer, and I think you are doing an awesome job of living out your beliefs. Back to your poem. I could ...

Bravo! This is a really good poem. It has awesome rhythm and sync. I think, though, The first letter of every line is supposed to be capitalized. I dunno for ...

This is a beautiful poem. I really like this. It's sad, yet meaningful. I can't imagine how beautiful this would be with music. Great job!!

Wow, this is a very good piece! Your grammer is excellent, and you writing is fluent and colorful. I really really liked it. It pulled me in, and is very ...

Ok, thanks for the tip.