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velvetmuse

  • Lyrics » Realistic, Romantic Re: A Little Bird

    I like the concept of it, it's also relate-able, but I think you repeat yourself more than needed. After reading "I’m so tired of this city " the fifth time, ...

    Mar 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: imposter

    that's very sweet, thank you

    Jan 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Self

    Very emotional. I love the way everything seems to flow.

    Sep 23, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: it's cold where you left me

    I've read a couple of your poems, and this has to be my favorite. "I’m like a journal, each sheet covered in yesterday’s mistakes." Is probably my favorite line. Although ...

    Sep 21, 2012


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