valeriejcz

Thanks for the tips!

This is a very sweet poem, and I love it! Theres a topic somewere on this little negativity problem some peoples have...

I wrote it by hand and.....*sob* I threw it out!!!! Please forgive me!!!! wow, I'm hyper today :)

I loved it! Incandescence , you have some major problems with putting people down. I mean, yeah, you critique peoples but have you ever said something nice?

Some people have said that becouse it is negitive that dosn't mean it's a bad poem. I agree. But I also think that this poem is a bad poem, as ...

Thanks so much for all your help.... Good news! I changed it some and got an A!!!!!!

thanks for the tips. Yeah, my teacher did tell me to write why I chose it, but thanks anyway. And wow, I thought I had a conclustion. Opps!

I think its a letter and a poem. Its written in poetic form, and its reaaly good. I love it!

I thought that (no offence) was horrible! It was negitive and really, pointless

Wow, I love it and its sooo long!!! And I hope u don't really think I'm that anoying... ;)

well, I posted it Becouse I thought it was funny. If you had read all of it in the begining you would know I wasn't serious

I don't think its deep either. What I said was when I wrote it (around three years ago) I thought it was deep

well I'm not a author, but I love it Syd!