usermalfunction

Thanks for the advice and thanks for deleting that comment. It was a slip of hand and I didn't know how to take it down.

Thank you for this review. It gave me a lot to think about. On the subject of characterization, could you give me some advice on how to do that better? ...

Thanks for the review. I tried to edit the story a little bit and include more descriptions of the characters. As for the repetitive language, I'll be sure to watch ...

Thank you for the review. I'm very glad you like my characters! I am grateful for the tips and tried my best to use the advice while editing my work. ...

Thank you for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the work. I understand what you're saying about it being a bit short. I'll try to make my future chapters longer ...

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The first thing was the "reflection crimson and amber leaves" part. It seems to me like there should be an of after reflection though I'm not entirely sure whether that's ...