untameabletiger

I really like this. It has an immense amount of detail that fits it perfectly. The length to my was perfect for this piece. I got a little confused, but ...

[quote="HopeLove" We watched them bob and weave [/quote] After weave in the first part I feel like it's missing something right here. I like your form in this a lot. ...

This poem was simple, and of course was written well I sat in class on day bored, starring outside at the snow. May I note, I had a lot on ...

This poem is great! but I agree with MsMeagan about adding more emotion. It's Just What You Do To Me Its almost funny how you don’t know That the touch ...

I like these scenes a-lot, but i think you need to have an extra hook. Just having the cheating,break-up, make-up kind of gets..um... boring only because it's used in many ...

In my opinion, this was amazing!i loved your usage of words and how you explained the "what if" matter. Many people find it difficult to state their point, without offending ...

I love the idea and detail of this, but, in my opinion, you should try to restructure some of the sentences to avoid the constant repeated "I" *EX- in stead ...