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No problem!

No problem, glad you found this helpful, and I am interested to see where this goes!

You make some very good points about showing, not telling, and this is one of my biggest weaknesses. You make some excellent suggestions about improvement, which I will keep in ...

Ok thank you I just think doing that would probably make my reviews go faster:)

So, I looked it up on youtube, and I stand corrected. It theoretically can happen. wow. Anyways, glad you found this helpful, and keep posting chapters! Also, I have a ...

Also, another review would be welcome, but is not super necessary. You already have been very helpful!

Well, good to know that you enjoyed the poem, but this is a good point you make about it being split in two. Your not the only one to be ...

Well I am glad that you enjoyed the actual content of the poem then! At least then I know I am partially doing my job. But, I do see your ...

Thank you so much for your kind words, and also for you numerous corrections on typos, that was very useful as I am bad at catching those every when editing. ...

Thanks for taking the time to read and review! And yes, this short story is rather short, because this originally was intended to be a piece of flash fiction, but ...

Thanks so much for the review, and I will keep your points in mind. This was generally intended to be a very short piece, so I just wanted to focus ...

The pleasure is mine!

Whoops, I meant "karu," when Lydia mentioned how part of the contest was going to be karu skills

This is a good point that you make, and that actually makes a good deal of sense. Looking forward to chapter 3!

I also wanted to add... maybe the power went out earlier? That would make more sense, 200 years really is a long time...