ultraviolet

Actually, the ending was one of my favorite parts. It shows that not only does she see--OK, read--the money motivations of people, she did something to change it. It shows ...

Hi! OK, so I think I fixed most of the mistakes you guys pointed out. Maddy- I put in what happened to the ring. I have plans to describe her ...

Actually, yeah. Dex Reemer is narrating the story for everyone. I thought I made that clear in the prologue, but I guess I didn't. Do you have an idea how ...

Hey, thanks for the review! You're right, commas are my downfall. I'll work on that. And everything else you pointed out. Anyways, thanks for the comments. I'm still practicing when ...

Hey, thanks for the tips! I'll check them out. :)

Hey, I have part 4 out, if you're interested. :smt003 :elephant: LOVE --ULTRAVIOLET

I'll have to think about that. I kind of actually like writing limericks. Which is weird because I'm not usually into poetry. Can you think of any other famous characters ...

Thanks. I'll have to think about doing that. It might be harder to capture Emmett though.... So, maybe. :) :elephant: LOVE --ULTRAVIOLET

Thanks yuriko. There are some words that are probably totally obvious of how to spell, but totally elude me. Glad you like the poems. :) :elephant: LOVE --ULTRAVIOLET

Thanks everybody for the compliments and advice. :) Whether or not you'll see more poetry from me is a mystery. I was just playing around. It could be fun, but ...

Thanks! :D And thanks for reviewing! :D :elephant: LOVE --ULTRAVIOLET

Don't worry, he's a biggish part in the next part. I think I'm gonna ask them to move it to novels section. Oh, and if you tell me your surname ...

Hi! Skins, a few things: First, I fixed the grammar errors you pointed out. Second, the musician comes in later. I didn't find it totally relevant to point him out ...

Skins, thanks for reviewing! You're right, tenses are my weakness. I've been putting extra emphasis into perfecting those, though. I'll tell you as soon as Part 3 is out. Shouldn't ...

Hey. About the dolls, if you've ever been to Disneyworld, there is a ride called "a small world after all." Basically, there are these dolls dressed up in outfits from ...