ultraviolet

Hey there! First, I want to ask you, do you really need a prologue? Most people don't like them, and it's a common fact that unless they're done really well, ...

Hey there! I only read the first couple reviews, so sorry if I repeat anything. I paused. Maybe I was getting a bit too panicky. A bit too girly. Maybe ...

Hey! I really like this. =) I don't really have time to do a full-fledged review right now (I'm at my sister's) but I'll get to this tomorrow. (If there's ...

Hey. Here at last. Each , no matter how gruff and sturdy glanced up and studied the shadows for movement. The underlined part is the reason you have the comma ...

Hey there! Thought I'd give you a review for once. ;) First off, the title drew me in, so a plus for that. Even though the story didn't turn out ...

Hey there! Alright, so, for Ewan's part, I didn't really see anything wrong. One of your more interesting chapters, at least in my opinion (if that counts for anything >.>). ...

Hey there! Okay, first off, the "talk" between Jen and Kael. For the most part it was pretty good, but it got pretty confusing. For especially hard parts, I'd do ...

Hey! I love this, mainly because of its uniqueness. I like how you describe the things that are happening to it, and especially about Martin. But like all things, it's ...

Hi there! Okay, so once again you have an enthralling read. But - and this isn't huge, but it is something to keep in mind - you do a lot ...

Hey, Orinette! So, this is pretty long, so sorry if this ends up being a short review - ironic of me to say, but there is a method to my ...

Hi there! Sorry it's taken so long to get to this. First off, I like the idea of the masked hero. Definitely has the potential to be something I'd pick ...

Hey there! Okay, so the first thing that I thought when I read this was that the girl was about nine or ten. Maybe eleven. I don't know why exactly; ...

Okay, I'm not actually out to give a full-blown review here (though if you want one, just ask and I will). I just have a couple of little quick things. ...

Hey there, Orinette. :) Kael knew from the moment his fingers touched Aeron’s neck that he was going to kill him. Like Ranger said, I was confused about who was ...

Hey there! Okay, to follow up Spork, my first point is about Lauren. Earlier you showed us she was drunk - like, drunk drunk. Could barely even walk. Now she ...