ulala8

Thank you for your very thorough reviews. This was the final chapter of this. This is not one of my modern works, so it's not my best. Also, it was ...

I have the rating on here to warn people of the coming events in here, and I agree that the story doesn't yet show the rating. Have you read the ...

I got the suicide bit, but I wasn't sure what you were trying to convey.

This is an amazing story! It gave me chills! Your description was brilliant and I can't get enough of it. However, your paragraph sizes are intimidating. You should probably cut ...

This is a very beautiful, very well written piece! It's short and sweet, and quick to the point: just my style! The only thing that I can suggest is for ...

I can honestly tell you that I haven't read this, save for skimming. The paragraphs are FAR too long. Allow me to separate one for you. I hope that it ...

I need to separate the chapters, yes. The character "Captain" doesn't have a name. He's not vital enough for me to have given him a name and it isn't really ...

I apologize for the negative review, but what I was trying to express is that the swearing distracted from the story. It's mostly just the focus on fuck that is ...

Is there anything particularly that you like best about it?

Another thing I have to say is about what you had to say for Xerai. Xerai does have a little more depth to him than just "evil for evil's sake". ...

I greatly appreciate your thorough review of the first chapter. Thank you so much~ It really helps~ One thing that I should point out is that the woman wasn't actually ...