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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: How I feel

    How I feel is a really great poem. I like the word choice and the form of the poem. As a poet it is always good to have great form ...

    Nov 4, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: How I feel

    Hi there! Let's see, your poem... Maybe seperate some things, they're kind of in a big blob. I liked the poem but since it's about a certain person, I feel ...

    Nov 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: How I feel

    Thank you so very much, all criticism are welcome. It is good to see that you enjoy it. I know about my punctuation; I have never been great at it ...

    Nov 1, 2009


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