twilight12

its different then twilight and why shouldnt i?

ok thanks =) ill look at the sentances again and redit them

this is the first chapter and why do i have to post two?

thanks ill try and edit it again and thanks again :)

i kind of liked it but exactly how did she lose her memorys? but its still good keep writing!

i liked it but one thing i dont really understand is where was the character at? and why did she ask the character was there?

ok let me re write and ill post it again tomorrow and see if its less like twilight and thanks for the review it wasnt to harsh

really good i liked it

very good i liked it :D