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Inkheart. This movie was bad. Worse. Beyond worse. Worse than beyond worse. None of the actors suited the parts, it was terribly acted, and - WHAT ON EARTH DID THEY ...

Uhh... what is an MC?

Uhh... what is an MC?

That was very good. I personally like the way how it's mysterious, it makes me want to keep reading. Please, continue with this particular story, I want to read more! ...

Thank you. I wrot it rather quick, and have to admit, its not my best work.

I know! Like me... brown eyes, blondeish brown hair, maxish attitude... I'd be perfect for the part of max! Just get a cute guy to be Fang, please, not some ...

That was great, especially for a beginer piece. You have potential in poems, and to get a better grasp on 'em check out someone elses work, thats what i did, ...

That was great, especially for a beginer piece. You have potential in poems, and to get a better grasp on 'em check out someone elses work, thats what i did, ...

I'm going to avoid the maximum ride movies like the plauge.

Thank you, Dannielle. I have felt this way many times before, but not so much now. I hope that this feeling will never come to pass anyone else, but yet ...

This sounds like my kinda book. I will post more later for critiquing purposes, hasta lavista peeps.

That was great, especilly if you are new to the concept, but f.y.I, I'm pretty sure there's supposed to be 4 lines per stanza...

Thank you. I've read it through, and the you gets kinda annoying when you get right down to it. I never actually lost someone recently, I just put on someone ...

Thank you. This is the first poem I've written (accept those chessey kind you writ in grade school, but they don't count, do they?) And I must admit, this is ...

Thank you. I must admit, It's a bit rough around the edges, yet that can be fixed.