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  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: I Smile

    This piece was amazing! I can relate to this character so much because of the simple fact that I try to be the strong friend in my small social group, ...

    Aug 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: My only question is why

    I really like this, but I feel like there isn't enough emotion in it. I totally get that there is sadness in it, but there could be more imagery describing ...

    Aug 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Bridges

    This honestly made me feel so much. Knowing that a relationship was so dysfunctional that the people wanted to die and never really got along unless they were stoned. For ...

    Aug 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The Song Of A Soldier Girl

    This is amazing! I love the word choice, and the form of each stanza. I like how the "soldier girl" dresses the different people in her life. Just in my ...

    Aug 18, 2017


That, sir, is the most frightening battlefield in the world: the blank page.
— Larry McMurtry, Comanche Moon