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  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: I Smile

    This piece was amazing! I can relate to this character so much because of the simple fact that I try to be the strong friend in my small social group, ...

    Aug 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: My only question is why

    I really like this, but I feel like there isn't enough emotion in it. I totally get that there is sadness in it, but there could be more imagery describing ...

    Aug 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Bridges

    This honestly made me feel so much. Knowing that a relationship was so dysfunctional that the people wanted to die and never really got along unless they were stoned. For ...

    Aug 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The Song Of A Soldier Girl

    This is amazing! I love the word choice, and the form of each stanza. I like how the "soldier girl" dresses the different people in her life. Just in my ...

    Aug 18, 2017


The illiterate of the 21st century will not be those who cannot read and write, but those who cannot learn, unlearn, and relearn.
— Alvin Toffler