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toukyo

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: i will bleed you white

    Hello! Bleeding someone white is very interesting because to bleed someone white is a contradiction within itself. To make someone bleed is often associated with the act of killing, of ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Not everyone dies gracefully

    Hi. I just read your beautiful poem and I would like say it is a really good poem in terms of imagery. There is nothing necessarily wrong about the poem ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Misplaced

    Hi. I came across this poem not too long ago and came to write my opinion and a few suggestions for the poem. Overall, the poem holds a very deep ...

    Oct 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: The Glass Door

    Hi! First of all, I think the poem was written beautifully yet there are some parts which I think could have been done better. 1. I praise you for putting ...

    Oct 16, 2015


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