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Re: [01] the otherplace tear
*flails* cursed typos! Thanks to both of you for pointing them out, I thought I'd caught them all, but evidently not XD Rae : Yes, there should be 'or' there ...
Sep 25, 2007 -
Re: Saphyri (Nova Terre, with a better name)
Wheee! May I asked what caused the change in title? I think I liked Nova Terra more. Beside the Great Sea, where thousands of years’ worth of waves and spray ...
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: A Masterpiece in Resin
Phorcys : Gah, those sentences are rather messy, thanks for pointing them out, I'll try and fix 'em ^^ Thank you for reading *gives cookie* Trident : Reading through it ...
Jul 31, 2007 -
Re: A Masterpiece in Resin
Lady Pirate : Thanks for reading this, I'm glad you liked that line, I did too ;) Magicman : Oh man, I'm always doing that! *goes back and edits* Thanks ...
Jul 29, 2007 -
Re: The Astronaut's Wish
Thank you both for looking through it so thoroughly I've been through and blasted the typos that you both pointed out, I usually tend not to write in first person, ...
Jul 21, 2007 -
Re: The Break In: a YWS fanfiction [Part Two added]
'I vote for Pat Buchanan' Priceless, Clau XD
Jul 18, 2007 -
Re: Flash Fic - Sword Tag
Oooo, that's pretty creepy, Sumi. For some reason it reminded me of Lunar Legend Tsukihime Really should stop watching so much anime... A shrill cry knifed through the air, pulling ...
Jun 29, 2007 -
Re: Johnny and the Snails
The Box : I think I can see what you mean by the end being slightly faulty, I'll try and figure that out, and the descriptions too, reading through it ...
Jun 25, 2007 -
Re: Speak
I bought it from a libary stock clearance because it was cheap, and I'm so glad I did. It's good. It's very good. I really like it, and I don't ...
Jun 12, 2007 -
Re: Chara
JFW : I'm glad you liked it, although it wasn't really second person, it was first as 'I' was telling the story XD I think I'm just going to take ...
Jun 12, 2007 -
Re: Chara
:coughLEOJEANcough: :oops: I knew it! I knew that if you read this, that was what you were going to think >
Jun 11, 2007 -
Re: The Agri and the Engineer: 1.1
Sam :Reading through it again, I can see what you mean with the sentance varietion and the clauses. I think that was the thing that was bugging me about it ...
May 28, 2007 -
Re: Eguain, Deviled egg
Aww, it's quite sad, poor Eguain, being eaten like that. I shall never eat an egg again. Well at least not this week anyway. It was as kinda funny, even ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Keys To The Kingdom
My little sister loves these, I lend her them all the time. I found them a little disappointing after reading the abhorsen trilogy, I don't think they're as good, although ...
May 13, 2007 -
Re: Mortal Engines Quartet by PHILIP REEVE
I only ever read the first one. I enjoyed it but I never felt the urge to read the others. I might do, one day.
Apr 19, 2007
