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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Monster Under My Bed

    Hiii~ :D Those three words were the words I feared the most. You've got a little bit of repitition there. I was tucked into my bright orange covers, in my ...

    Jun 21, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Rayne's Story

    Hi there! :D I see you're new, so, welcome to YWS! We have a rule about the ratio of stories we post to reviews we write, and try to keep ...

    Jun 11, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Child of One - Chapter 1

    Hiii~ :D I see you're new to YWS, so hello! I'm little tin fish, feel free to call my fish or tinny or anything else that takes your fancy. Why ...

    Apr 6, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: COT: Vicuna and Her Brother, Daimin. Feedback appreciated.

    'Ello :D Firstly, I think this is kinda a lot for one post, next time you might want to break it up into several sections; part one part two and ...

    Jan 30, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Vanilla Fillip

    'Ello 'ello :D Perfect lines of oak trees smile on me today, their leaves dappling my dark brown skin in freckles of gold. Central park has never been so beautiful. ...

    Jan 24, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Hold-up.

    Hiii~ :D guess who's got me again! “I can’t believe we’re finally going. I remember spending hours on the phone with you while we tried to get our parents to ...

    Jan 7, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Elemental Gem

    Hiii~ :D In a regular sized house, an old woman sat in a rocking chair with her hands in her lap, rocking back and forward. She enjoyed the warmth of ...

    Jan 4, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Halloween II

    Hey there, xxxDo! I've not read the first Halloween, so apologies if I'm out of the loop a little ;) The walls in the distance are equally plain, [s]on first ...

    Jan 3, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Quality Control - Pt 1

    Hi there! I see you're new to YWS, so welcome! As a rule we try to keep the ratio of reviews to works we post at 2:1, so go out ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Accidents Happen

    Hey, Kaylyn! Head lolling to the side, drool trickled out of my mouth like a forgotten water tap. I made an effort to close my mouth , but couldn't. Eyes ...

    Dec 18, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Love Note (Chapter one, edited)

    Sorry I was so very slow in getting around to this! From the looks of it everyone else went super in depth with this, so I guess there's a chance ...

    Oct 14, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Nicotine and Spice Part Two/Three

    Silly Fish is rather slow. The first thing that leapt out at me was the sheer size of the paragraphs. In my opinion they're far too big, and I found ...

    Sep 14, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Nicotine and Spice - Part One/Three

    Yo, I are here as requested! A few little nitpicks first: His awakening was unpleasant; he remained sitting still and staring dully for as long as possible before waking up ...

    Jul 28, 2008
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Oor Wey o Spikin'

    Hay thar 8D My name is Mattae. I am sixteen years old and I live in Scotland 4321 ad. I can see why you'd start off with that, but I ...

    Jul 20, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: DELETED

    Guess who's back! With her eggs! I walked into the [s]Jacob Burns Law[/s] Library and smiled. I didn’t come for the books, I had brought my own. No, I came ...

    Jul 1, 2008


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