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Re: Aethel's Sketch
This, Myth, sent shivers up my spine. Reading it immediately made me think of something you'd written earlier, I think it was 2.2, where Aethel mentions being referred to as ...
Feb 28, 2007 -
Re: Work or Die
The first thing I though when I read the title was Work or Die? Read or Die! (yet more proof that I am a sad sad person) A-nyway. Stupid ass ...
Jan 4, 2007 -
Re: ALIEN ATTACK! IMPORTANT INFO FOR THE SAFTEY OF OUR PLANET!
Firstly, space it out so it's easier to read. It is a scary thing when a printer develops a personality of it's own Take out the apostrophe. It seems like ...
Dec 20, 2006 -
Re: The Chair of Wind & Darkness: Draft Two [1-4]: Closed
The ladys at my college LRC will hate me for it, and say I'm wasting paper (they say that even if it's work -_-") but I'm printing this off so ...
Dec 19, 2006 -
Re: Queen of the Harpies
ROAR! Brenna was contemplating over the last few days. The word 'was' doesn't seem to fit properly in my mind, I would change it to Brenna had been contemplating... The ...
Dec 6, 2006 -
Re: Uglies
Uglies is very good, although I still don't thaink that Pretties was as good. I'm yet to buy Specials. They do have the added benefit in that they're some of ...
Dec 4, 2006 -
Re: A quick 3 page story i need opinions on
Okie dokie, I can see you've changed the beginning part a little from when I read this in le bookshop. (And Elk has lost his head O_o) The first thing ...
Nov 30, 2006 -
Re: The Pearlman Institute
Meow I was reading through and just though I'd mention; The cages smelled of blood and urine with a hint of ammonia Urine degrades into ammonia, and that's the smell. ...
Nov 23, 2006 -
Re: A Prayer
aka just go smoke some weed and youll get it) I won't comment on that O_o Anyhoo, I really liked it, it reminded me of a poem I once did ...
May 12, 2006 -
Re: Lord of The Rings or Harry Potter?
I don't really like either. I tried reading LoTR but It bored me beyond belief. I liked the first Harry potter book but after that I developed a deep rooted ...
Mar 7, 2006 -
Re: John Steinbeck: Of mice and men and others Brilliant!
After I read 'Of mice and Men' for my GCSE it killed all joy I would have ever gotten from reading the book on my own. We had to analyse ...
Feb 10, 2006
