time_fox

Well, Anna Graham got all the things I was going to say for the grammar. Put a little more sensory images in your story. All I have really read is ...

It seems like you had to force the rhyming which sort of took away from the poem. I didn't see any grammar so great job with that. ^_^ Umm, the ...

“Chill the fuck out” says Ellina ridiculously “You almost hit me.” I just pulled this line out. You need a comma after out and also you need a comma after ...

This poem has a lot of meaning to it. Some of the lines were forced because you didn't stick to one metre. Well I'm not one to talk about it ...

It has a mystical feeling to it. Wondering who or what you can believe in. I think it is true that people have to have something to believe in other ...

These are good books. Not really one of my favorites but still good. Anyone who watched the moives will see that the boos are better which they are. Seeing as ...