tigeraye

it wasnt bad, thanks

Thanks for reading!!! I switched the genre and will change the title if I can think of something else

weirder things have happened @_@

Thanks for reading, I appreciate it ^^

eh, I went ahead and changed the backstory so that she actually lives with her grandmother who is dying of old age, and she uses her credit card to order ...

Thanks for reading. This story was inspired by a novel titled "Everything I Never Told You" I quite enjoyed that delved into the strange death of a daughter, caused in ...

Thanks for reading ^^ and yeah, wanted to continue this but kind of couldn't come up with any ideas..

Thanks for reading. I picked the title because there's some sort of irony to it, "here" and "hear" having the same pronunciation, and the fact that neither of the main ...

Thanks for reading. I'm still thinking about it, but I might write a sequel that explains some of your questions more thoroughly. Basically though, Miranda told Joey about her plans ...

Well, maybe Sandra and Mary both don't need to exist since they seem to fulfill the same role. And you can definitely tell the story while appealing to the reader's ...

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oh, well to clarify I wasnt asking if the first two chapters were needed, I meant the italics part at the start of this one XD

If you want me to be honest with you, this was an intentionally terrible story because i wanted to see if people would be honest towards reviewing a mediocre story, ...

thanks for reviewing! err, I guess I sort of rushed this because I wrote the other chapter like four times and was kind of in get to the end mode. ...

and I'd hope the characters would be easier to keep track of, because I just about completely stopped adding them like twenty chapters ago, heheh......