tigeraye

heh, don't worry about it, I enjoy reading your reviews x_x I'll make the changes some time. Thanks a bunch.

hm, I'd be curious to know what other parts you found boring, but if not, its cool. Thanks for the review.

I didn't mean to ignore you! Thanks for the review, I'll put up the next chapter sometime in the next week ._.

oh, I missed this. thanks.

hi, thanks for reviewing. Yeah, I usually do first person, in fact out of everything I've posted here only one story isn't. The question of who was lying and who ...

Thanks for the review. I was trying to make a protagonist that you actually want to see taken down in the end, even if his wife did wrong him, he ...

heh, I think I took out "promise" to change something then forgot about. Thanks for the heads up and review

thanks. I'm working on the ellipses thing.

hmm...I changed the part about the dropping clipboard. If you have anything about the story itself, I'd appreciate it, if not, thanks for the help anyway!

You sure know how to get a lot of likes on your work.

Thanks for the review. Don't think I'm going to be doing edits to this, but I've been entertaining the idea of doing a sequel to this, actually, only as a ...

Well, either way, thanks for your help.

I don't know if I mentioned this in the review I did of your prologue or not, but using ellipses at the beginning of a sentence isn't grammatically proper and ...

woah, thanks for your help. I went through your review and edited some of the things you mentioned, do tell me if it's better if you get the time. I ...

...heh. You know, I've been working on this since May, and I've never even thought of that plot hole. I'd just chalk it up as a huge coincidence, made somewhat ...