tigeraye

...Another thing was that this story takes place in 1996, not I fixed that too ._.

ah shoot, the pizza thing was a mistake, I'll fix it. That was from an earlier draft where he pretended to be a pizza delivery guy, I had to re-upload ...

Thank you for reviewing! This was just a rough draft that I decided to upload months yeah...kind of jumbled, heh...

Thanks for your review, I appreciate the criticism!

Thanks for reviewing, and no, I'm not offended at all!! I like getting criticism. The more I try to think about this story, the more it disturbs me, so I...try ...

Just want to say that I love that title

thank you for reviewing. i wrote this up really quickly in tribute to an acquaintance of my mine who passed away, but poetry is sort of lost on me. i ...

please respond to this if you get a chance. thank you.

This is a really interesting start! Your character's description is very vivid and intriguing, but now keep going ^^

no worries. If there's ever anything you need reviewed, send me a message and I'll get to it asap ^^

I think the most important goal for me is to write something long as the person reading it was entertained, most else can be dismissed

no, you were right with the genders, that was a typo...Casey was born a woman and became a man. For writing itself, I'm not sure what advice to give you. ...

Oh, wow that's a long review...well, the least I can say is thanks...I've been self-doubting myself lately so getting positive feedback definitely helps... The last part of this chapter was ...

sorry if I offended you at all, my interpretation was that God banished him to eternal separation for never accepting him. It's a different interpretation on what Hell is, in ...

its just a short by the way.