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I think your work, if anything else, shows the effect that strong names can have on drawing readers into a piece of literature. Blake Blackheart and John Shepard...those awesome names ...

I thought this was a rather exciting chapter, I enjoyed both the quick pace and emotional dialogue between Hakim and Kajal. That said, I also think there were some things ...

hello. I don't think I've reviewed any short stories in a good while, so I was looking forward to reading this. The clock chimes midnight as I creep through the ...

Hello To start, I'd like to bring up the subject of characterization. Right off the bat, I felt that you developed a strong emotional connection with your characters. I feel ...

Hello. I enjoy reading such things that would be mundane like learning how to use a computer turned into such an invigorating plot. Thing is, Kajal seemed like he knew ...

I found this story to have quite a powerful atmosphere to it; I enjoy the gladiator like, medieval-esque type of setting this takes place in. The action is dramatic, cunning ...

That's an interesting way to put it. Sadly, many people tend to attach a negative stigma to fan fiction, either to a perceived low quality or because you're basing your ...

I went ahead and read the first three chapters of this story. I want to say that it wasn't boring or bad to read; it was quite easy to follow ...

Hello again! I enjoy in this chapter both how fast moving the plot is, and how much more we start to learn about the main character being both compassionate and ...

hello. I found this to be a rather gripping story. You developed a sort of closeness between this family, then the parents ripped it apart, but by having Kajal be ...

Hello! Haven't gone back and read the rest of this like I said I was going to, but as for now I'm still going through the green room, and ran ...

hello. I was going through the back of the green room for works to review and ran into this one. Despite coming into the story quite late, I have to ...

Hello again! You do a lot of things well here, and not much that isn't well; thus, I don't have much to offer you in terms of improvement. Your characters ...

hello. This was a very...entertaining chapter. I don't know what else to say about a story where one moment, a doctor is destroying a patient's kitchen by tossing stuff in ...

hello! I think I already went into what I think your best attributes are as a writer, and they carry over here the same, so let's just get to it ...