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Re: It's Okay
Great job! It does, as Onomatomanic said, feel a little rushed at times but that is completely understandable considering you were on a strict time constraint. I always like stories ...
Aug 20, 2012 -
Re: compare
As a German speaking American, I loved your use of German! So a super high to that! But that is just one small thing I loved about this. I love ...
Aug 20, 2012 -
Re: The Dream Machine Chapter 1
Although a little choppy and jumpy at times, I think you have a great idea! Good job!
Aug 18, 2012