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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Wrapped Up

    I really love the emotion in this piece. So powerful. With just a bit of editing (for grammar and such) it would be worthy of publishing! :)

    Jan 17, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Your Loving Words

    This is such an amazing poem! I love it :) You are very talented, keep writing! I have nothing really critical to say, sorry.

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Quite Laughable

    I feel this as very strong and edgy, I agree it is rude. But it's to the point where I really like it. Great job :)

    Nov 10, 2011


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