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Re: An Ocean Death Would Be So Beautiful
Wow... Beautiful! I'm really truly in love with your work. However, I feel like the title does not suit the piece. It's just awkwardly phrased - it says what you ...
Apr 4, 2016 -
Re: The Ashes in the Urn - Part 3
Thanks for the review, Cricket! You're such a sweetheart :) Hahaha oh me and my dashes.... I love them, for some strange reason. I definitely know I overuse them though. ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: The Dresden
Awwww, you are an absolutely sweetie! Thank you so much for the review. This was a story I started writing 3-4 years ago, when I was really into pirates and ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: The Dresden
Loved it! Thanks for the feedback, you're great :D
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Untitled (For Now)
Hey! Thanks for your thoughts, I will take them into consideration. The red is supposed to represent an abundance of anger (which is the negative emotion that this person had ...
Dec 22, 2014 -
Re: Yet Not
Maybe, "Doctors of the world / cured patients / Yet a huge sum was charged"
Dec 22, 2014 -
Re: letting go
That is very interesting. I love the part where she calls out "LOVE" as if it were the most normal thing in the world. I believe that you can go ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Removed #3
^ In response to the above, I am writing a lot of short chapters. Besides, that is irrelevant to the point of the story... Some stories have no chapters at ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Seems Like Eternity
AWESOME!!! Finally something of yours that I actually liked. I just love your writing, its amazing. Write more soon :)
Mar 20, 2010 -
Re: Sun Drops
Love it Keep writing :smt003
Mar 20, 2010 -
Re: Removed #8
No problem! If I need help with some story writing, I know who to go to ;]
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: Removed #8
This poem is about murdering my mother...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Removed #8
Technically, Snow doesn't turn read with blood unless there's heaps and heaps of it in one single spot. But seeing as these things tend to spread out, unless she gutted ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: ode to an alienated lover
My god... this is fantastic. I am in love
Dec 30, 2009 -
Re: ode to an alienated lover
My god... this is fantastic. I am in love
Dec 30, 2009
