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  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: An Ocean Death Would Be So Beautiful

    Wow... Beautiful! I'm really truly in love with your work. However, I feel like the title does not suit the piece. It's just awkwardly phrased - it says what you ...

    Apr 4, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Ashes in the Urn - Part 3

    Thanks for the review, Cricket! You're such a sweetheart :) Hahaha oh me and my dashes.... I love them, for some strange reason. I definitely know I overuse them though. ...

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Dresden

    Awwww, you are an absolutely sweetie! Thank you so much for the review. This was a story I started writing 3-4 years ago, when I was really into pirates and ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Dresden

    Loved it! Thanks for the feedback, you're great :D

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Untitled (For Now)

    Hey! Thanks for your thoughts, I will take them into consideration. The red is supposed to represent an abundance of anger (which is the negative emotion that this person had ...

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yet Not

    Maybe, "Doctors of the world / cured patients / Yet a huge sum was charged"

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: letting go

    That is very interesting. I love the part where she calls out "LOVE" as if it were the most normal thing in the world. I believe that you can go ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Removed #3

    ^ In response to the above, I am writing a lot of short chapters. Besides, that is irrelevant to the point of the story... Some stories have no chapters at ...

    Mar 29, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Seems Like Eternity

    AWESOME!!! Finally something of yours that I actually liked. I just love your writing, its amazing. Write more soon :)

    Mar 20, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Sun Drops

    Love it Keep writing :smt003

    Mar 20, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Removed #8

    No problem! If I need help with some story writing, I know who to go to ;]

    Jan 9, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Removed #8

    This poem is about murdering my mother...

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Removed #8

    Technically, Snow doesn't turn read with blood unless there's heaps and heaps of it in one single spot. But seeing as these things tend to spread out, unless she gutted ...

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: ode to an alienated lover

    My god... this is fantastic. I am in love

    Dec 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: ode to an alienated lover

    My god... this is fantastic. I am in love

    Dec 30, 2009


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