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Re: Blind Love : rewrite
Casually she watches the clouds amble across the sky. Today Natalie is feeling every day of her twenty-three years. She lets her mind take her back to yesteryear. You switch ...
Jul 23, 2007 -
Re: Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows
I like it, but it's not the best of the HP books...I don't know why, but thr 6th and 7th really didn't do that much for me...maybe I was just ...
Jul 22, 2007 -
Re: Storms
Okay...for starters, Hera is the goddess of marital love. Which is exactly why she would NEVER cheat on Zeus. It was the other way around. Secondly, Hera is also their ...
Jul 20, 2007 -
Re: Pianist
“Hey, you wanna come to my birthday party this weekend?” Her eyes were eager. I didn’t know if I would have a ride, but I said “yes” anyway. "I'm trying ...
Jul 20, 2007 -
Re: Romeo was dead
I loved it! The grammar stuff didn't bother me, personally...the way you cut your sentences short really added to the drama, sort of a cliffhanger...the crowbar seemed rather random, but ...
Jul 20, 2007
