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thetalentedsloth

  • Poetry » General, General Re: do you

    Hey thanks!! i haven't added any periods for poetic effect! im trying to express nostalgia in the most authentic way can (not only through words)- hazey, undefined and incoherent because ...

    Nov 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Dear mama...

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    I liked how I learned a lot about either you or the character the poem talks about through four short stanzas. Being able to convey a lot with a little ...

    Nov 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: If These Walls Could Talk

    Hahahah yes, in fact this entire poem was a conversation ;)

    May 5, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: If These Walls Could Talk

    thank you!!

    May 5, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: If These Walls Could Talk

    ahh!! thank you so so much!

    Apr 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: If These Walls Could Talk

    Hii Steggy thanks for the review, you're right, that stanza does sound a little unpolished and long, I wanted to fit as much of the characters' relationship into that line ...

    Apr 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: If These Walls Could Talk

    love u raja ;)

    Apr 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: If These Walls Could Talk

    oh my!! thank you so much

    Apr 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Stylistic Choice

    a literary masterpiece

    Apr 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: If These Walls Could Talk

    Thanks!

    Apr 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: If These Walls Could Talk

    Thank you!!

    Apr 24, 2017


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— L.M. Montgomery, Anne of Green Gables