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Re: do you
Hey thanks!! i haven't added any periods for poetic effect! im trying to express nostalgia in the most authentic way can (not only through words)- hazey, undefined and incoherent because ...
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Re: Dear mama...
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Nov 6, 2017
I liked how I learned a lot about either you or the character the poem talks about through four short stanzas. Being able to convey a lot with a little ... -
Re: If These Walls Could Talk
Hahahah yes, in fact this entire poem was a conversation ;)
May 5, 2017 -
Re: If These Walls Could Talk
thank you!!
May 5, 2017 -
Re: If These Walls Could Talk
ahh!! thank you so so much!
Apr 25, 2017 -
Re: If These Walls Could Talk
Hii Steggy thanks for the review, you're right, that stanza does sound a little unpolished and long, I wanted to fit as much of the characters' relationship into that line ...
Apr 25, 2017 -
Re: If These Walls Could Talk
love u raja ;)
Apr 25, 2017 -
Re: If These Walls Could Talk
oh my!! thank you so much
Apr 25, 2017 -
Re: Stylistic Choice
a literary masterpiece
Apr 24, 2017 -
Re: If These Walls Could Talk
Thanks!
Apr 24, 2017 -
Re: If These Walls Could Talk
Thank you!!
Apr 24, 2017
