thetalentedsloth

I liked how I learned a lot about either you or the character the poem talks about through four short stanzas. Being able to convey a lot with a little ...

I love seeing fellow desis on this site hahah, this is really good job! Just a few things, only basic editing stuff: maybe capitalise the word "old" in the second ...

hi RippleGylf!! this is a beautiful poem! here's what I think: first off, the first stanza is very well written, and sets the poem up nicely with good imagery; the ...