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thestorygirl

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Voice In My Head

    Whoah. I love your stuff. It rymed and was pretty. I normally hate ryming poems but I actually likes this one

    Jan 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Betrayal

    Im back. It actually was really good. no kidding

    Jan 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Betrayal

    Hi and good bye. Antidisastablishmentarianism. goodbye.

    Jan 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Turmoil

    AWWWWWWW thanks craftywriter. I leave out word sometimes. I can skip entire paragraphs when I read and know exactly what happened with detail. I guess my mind just does that ...

    Jan 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Descendants - Prologue

    Hi im back. I forgot to say goodbye. Antidisastablishmentarianism. Goodbye.

    Jan 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Recoil

    Hi this is thestorygirl. Okay if you dont know what those three words are here is a spoiler.Just to let you know its in the poem so if you get ...

    Jan 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Bed, Pure

    WHOAH amazing. Just throughing that out there

    Jan 27, 2011
  • Script » General, General Re: The Hunter of Nightingale

    just to let you know all of the punctuation mistakes i take full credit for im horrible with puntuation. spelling mistakes is because i have a new computer and the ...

    Jan 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Kissing Cliff

    Thanks for the critism (did I spell that right?) I always have that problem and I'm working on it. Anyway happy Martin Luther King Jr. DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Im Going To Hell

    You scared me so bad. Now I'm gonna have nightmares. Thanx. But it was really good and well written.

    Jan 16, 2011
  • Script » General, General Re: The Dragon Stone

    It was a very good post. Now I will help you with the dialogue. Instead of tutting disapprovingly she should frown unhappily. Alexis tuts disapprovingly. You should say something that ...

    Jan 16, 2011


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