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This is very good. I like how you transition the new characters in and how they were not ready to tell Bard about the mission they were one. I am ...
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Bard shook his head in confusion. "What have I done?" he asked his friend Trent. "What happened to me?" Okay you had me confused with this sentence. Trent just killed ...
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: The Caverns of Kildun Aalda Chapter Two-Inside the Catacombs
Hey! Did you publish this on another site? I read this somewhere else. Still it is very good. A bit long but I honestly don't think it can be shortened. ...
Mar 7, 2010