theotherone

Hello Lydia. :) “Oh, well, I would say about twelve pounds and sixpence for this beauty. I wouldn’t mind her myself but I already have plenty of...Toys,” he smirked at ...

Hello there. :) Sometimes I forgot to leave the rooms; l ike today. Like didn't need a capital letter. I clipped the hair out of my face, and once I ...

Hello there. :) I've known him for years. He's one of my closest friends, but not yet to the point of he being like my brother. I think. People sometimes ...

Hello there. :) I just.. didn't want to live. Also I had extreme anger issues that got really hard to deal with sometimes. I still had holes in my walls ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with nitpicks and then go on with overall impression on your story. "Hey buddy comma, " His dad said. Normally when someone writes something that ...

Hello there. :) I hated the long nosed and hairy faced secretary, and her hideous round glasses. Did you mean long nosed instead of long noised? "My dreams are the ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression on the story. I brushed a piece of her purple highlights from her face ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression on your story. The sound of his voice gave me goose bumps, the way he ...

Hello there, I'm here as requested. :) I really like this poem, but I feel like you could go on for a little bit longer then what you have right ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with nitpicks, but there won't be too much since everyone already pointed them out... And I just don't mean friends, I want us to be ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression of your story. She was six months pregnant, single and very, very lonely . ...

Hello there. :) I just found one nitpick, and here it is. And when you’re done comma, the stars will be there to replenish you. This is the best therapy ...

Hello there. :) So I was going to review your stuff, but then it seems you don't want people to read it? First off, I want to say that critics ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression on your story. Not Her . He turned and looked at me, a hand ...

Hello there, I'm here as requested! :) Plot wise this was really good. The idea is a little bit cliche, since it's always the girl that gets beaten up, and ...