theotherone

Hey, Pink. Here I am again to review. And I have to say, just like the others, that this was amazing. Well pretty much all of it is amazing, right? ...

Hey Truth! So... This reminds me of something. ;) I really like the composition, and the meaning, although it is a little bit confusing at some point. I get how ...

This is always a great subject to write about. It happens to everyone, and therefore, we can pretty much all relate to it easily. Overall, I like it. You could ...

Hi there! :) I love, love, love, love this! You write beautifully, and although it is a little bit confusing and it is vague, that is the beauty of poetry, ...

Hi Pink. :) Everyone pretty much did all the mistakes I noticed, except for one. “Hunter has had a crush on her since freshman year. He never told me or ...

Hi stargazer9927! For my review, I'll begin with the nitpicks and then with the overall impression, okay? "It's an hour before and you're just barley barely telling me now?" "Well ...

Hi there :) So I think you know how I do my reviews, right? Grammar first, then little tips, and keep the best for last, the overall impression! So I'll ...

Hi there, I'm going to do a little nitpicks, first and then we shall go with the overall impression, alright? 'I''m very sorry.' He said. 'I should have watched where ...

Hi there, The grammar seems pretty fine, except for the occasional typo's. There were three cars in the driveway of the house of my destination, the mix of shadow s ...

Hi there, Liz bit back the scream that she had been about to release, not wanting to give him the satisfaction that he craved. “I want you to call my ...

Hi there :) First for the grammar, your major errors here are the comma's. You need them in a work to make the sentence less choppy and make it flow ...

Hi :) okay, so first, i would like to point out some sentences that got me a little bit confused. In my unruly English class my teacher decided to step ...

Hi, I agree with Jessica, it's not long enough for us to know your characters and the story line. I know it, since I've already read your story, but other ...

hey! I love the way you write and the details. I could see Draven and Lila talking on that pew in the church, every details. This is what I love, ...

Hey! I really like the plot line, i think it's a interesting story. The only thing that bothered me is the pace, it's a little bit slow going, but I ...