theotherone

Hello there. :) After spending yet another weekend moping around the flat comma pondering about my newfound single life, my parents finally snapped. We planned to meet after work tomorrow, ...

Hello there, I'm here for a review as requested. :) I'll begin with the nipticks, and then go on with my overall impression. In bold are the comments, in red, ...

Hello there. :) Violetta Valéry was a role that every girl at the opera wished to play. I was, luckily, part of the talented singers that were going to have ...

Hello there. :) Shall I begin with grammar? I shook my head comma “No period. " It should be the other way around. I nodded comma relieved I could get ...

Hello Rob. :) He is angry, enraged ! The only things he can think of are the things he will say to her . The things he will do to ...

Hello there. :) First, I'll begin with a nitpick... Yes, just one. ;) Or maybe two. And so I do so , leaning over the grimy seats to give him ...

Hello there, I'm here as requested! :) I like this poem, and the imagery is great, but I find that the flow is a little bit awkward. I'll try to ...

Hello there. :) First stanza was good, and I loved it. It sets the mood, and gets the reader interested in the story. And you pushed me away, Pushed me ...

Hello, I'm here as requested. :) Wow, this was pretty good. At first, I wasn't sure where it was going, but the ending was great, and explained it all, so ...

Hello, I'm here as requested! This is some poem you've got. :) I have to be honest, and say I wasn't kind of confused at first, because I wasn't sure ...

Hi. If you read this I automaticly love you. If you comment I love you even more. Questo è dedicato a M. Spero che il mio ricordo di te ti ...

Hello there. :) Even though no light pours from the midnight moon, I can see every characteristic of my bedroom . Bedroom is one word. The bathroom has yellow-white walls ...

Hello there. :) For these old women who never accomplished anything in their silly little lives , Lifes isn't a word that exist, it should be lives. :) The time ...

Hello Allie, I'm here for another review! Chapter 12 I didn't even bother going to my locker before trying to find him, I had to find him. I practically ran ...

Hello there. :) Cute story you've got here. :) The point of view original, and I really like it. I wish you could tell us a little more about why ...