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  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: First Crush

    This is an interesting story, with some great descriptive imagery. However, there are some problems. For example, the text of this story is sort of crammed into a small area--this ...

    Nov 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: woodpecker (part two of "depression")

    This poem made me cry. I love how truthful it is! Great job, and is there a part 3?

    Nov 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Looks can be deceiving

    Oct 31, 2017


If I have any beliefs about immortality, it is that certain dogs I have known will go to heaven - and very, very few persons.
— James Thurber