thehotinpsychotic

Thanks! And thanks for the corrections; one was a typo.

You did a great job on this! My only nitpick would have to be that the line "Whose kind, gentle, mild, shy," doesn't flow quite the same. Also, you used ...

Thanks! And yeah, I have yet to go back and completely revise this.

Thanks! It's long because it's meant to be a novella, and I wasn't quite sure how updating chaptered works happened. I'll have to do that once I get more points, ...

Aw thanks so much! And yeah, I'm probably going to go back and change it some because it doesn't quite all add up. It's entirely fiction, I've been told I'm ...