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Hello there! Here I am, as requested. Lets begin the review :) Red - Mistakes Green - Corrections Purple - Bits I Liked Pink - Suggestions I cried. Looking back ...

:) Welcome to YWS :) My name is Eddie and I'm going to review this for you today, and quite frankly; I'm going to correct all of your grammar and ...

Hey there, I'm Eddie and I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this for you. :) Please don't think I'm nitpicky but I do tend to pick out every ...

Hey there, my name is Eddie and I'm going to take a stab at reviewing this for you today. :) First of all, nice title. Caught my eye straight away, ...

Hey there, as you so politely asked for a review I am here to grant you that wish. :) First of all, this was a very nice beginning. Straight away ...

Well hello there, seems its me again. ;) I'm trying out a new way of reviewing stories, you're my test subject. Aren't you lucky. Red - Mistakes Green - Corrections ...

Hey, I'm Eddie and I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this for you today. :) First of all, wow. You have a very unique and interesting writing style, ...

Hello there, I'm Eddie and I'm going to have a stab at reviewing this for you today. :) Kelcey shouted from the outside of my door as I laid awake ...

Hey there, I'm Eddie and I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this for you today. :) Crystal jolted up from her bed. " It was just a dream ...

Hey, I'm Eddie, and I'm going to have a go at reviewing this for you. :) First of all, wow. Wow again, I was definitely NOT expecting the ending, so ...

I absolutely love this, dreams are amazing things. Its where I get a lot of story ideas from, I really need to get myself a 'Dream Diary'. I really admire ...

right i'm new, so i hope this is the usual way to make comments. :) anywhoo, i really liked this piece, it was short and sweet and at no point ...