thefireinmeisJC

Thanks Rider! I laughed to myself when you said how its too early to tell anything, and it is. I felt like I had to start from the beginning with ...

Would it really matter what is said within quotation marks of any character? I'm not sure...if I'm understanding you...because dialogue certainly does matter. What the mother said certainly does matte

because you paste on a fake smile for all the people you hate, pretending they're your friends Hah, if only we could just let them know that we hate their ...

haha that was quick. Anyways, I did mean "spite". If I actually continued this story, I would reveal that Dante is gay. Marcello isn't really his father, Dante's real parent's ...

*bares teeth at Joseph for being mean and not continuing TDNE. Bad Joseph. But that's ok...I do it all the time...*

Wow. This was....interesting. Hmm, normally I wouldn't associate it with horror. It was...eye opening? Anyways, great job! On with the review: See if your wild eyes can penetrate the inkiness ...

Can you do me a favor and PM me tomorrow to remind me to review this? lol i have a bad memory and I'm so tired... JC

haha, I just read your message and I was like "I wasn't done!!!" so here I am again. Where was I....oh, yes Ok, since the time I made my first ...

Hello again! Back as promised. Nice and awake. At the station a young women woman was sitting, waiting for the train she took into work everyday. When the train came ...

actually never mind. I didn't push submit (??) so I'm going to rewrite my beginning nit picks that I thought I posted... Hey Kakali, here's your review as requested. Quote: ...

Whoops, my bad. I accidently pushed submit. :P "The names' Lou!" He said. "The name's Lou!" He said. "Well, lady Claire, pleasant tidings to you," He smirked. Using the word ...

Yeah, i know. Though I like the name Jesse, so I made it a girl anyway. :D

Wow I feel really stupid now...ok: Reverie is basically Heaven...though I had to do some background research on what people think what you look like when you go to Heaven....Initially, ...

Excuse me for being a lazy bum but I'm a horrible name thinker upper so all the "Earthly" words (ie playroom, light bulb, lunch) will be changed to make it ...

Wow. I truly love each and every one of you. Thanks, for all the help! I find it fascinating to see where everyone was confused though I thought it was ...